Essay #1 explanation.

After last class session I now believe that constructive criticism is key when developing a well built essay. Coming to class with only a single page typed up, my idea of relating bringing up baby to the Roaring 20s varied in its length. I was worried about not having enough information to reach my five page requirement. The idea of relating Susan's dominance throughout the movie to Woman gaining the right to vote would have allowed to compare dominance within females in that time. My partner in class explained to me that I should find other female leads that could help broaden my playing field when explaining woman’s dominance in the 1920s. I could also choose aspects within the way females would dress and talk. For instance the infamous Flappers are individuals who dress and act just like Susan throughout the play. Grammar and categorizing my ideas are also key aspects, I did not want to sound repetitive when explain my ideas so I was told I should go in time order in a way that I can show progression throughout the era.